The Girl Next Door

The Girl Next Door

A Poem by TheCakeMachine
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A poem I wrote in my free time about the struggles of being LGB

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The Girl Next Door


She is the girl next door

Everyday I dreamed of her

But I knew that she would never love me

No matter how hard I tried


I thought I knew why

I wasn’t pretty enough for her

I was too fat, too ugly

I needed to change


I pushed my limits

I tried so hard

But in the end

All I did was hurt myself


But when I was laying alone

In that cold hospital bed

She came to me and said

“I love you too…”

© 2016 TheCakeMachine


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Awe, sweet ending. Made me feel sad in the middle when you wrote about how she didn't want you but then she came around.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good story, heartbreaking end though D:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 8, 2015
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TheCakeMachine
TheCakeMachine

Big Rapids, MI



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I am a girl who loves to write and sing. more..

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