five in the hole

five in the hole

A Poem by Amber Victoria Tudor

The child told me to stay
Because family has always
Been a fantasy
The old lady told me to
To say F**k you
I like cats
The girl that likes
To dress up in diamonds
And pretend to be a movie star
Always looked for something better
And pointed him out to me
With her sharp eyes
The alcoholic
Just loved having a buddy
But knew that everything
Was
Full of acquaintance
And sex
And pushed me
To use it
Me?
I wanted to love
I wanted to live

© 2009 Amber Victoria Tudor


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Poetry is another form of heart that displays whatever shinning up in life. So here you transmitting the real nicefeelings of yous iin words, very smoothly & thought provokingly.

Looking forward to reading you!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow, sharply beautiful poem...Melancholy and dark, yet a tinge of hope in the end...which is always the last thing in the pandora's box. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


sweet. i like cats too. to bad you live in costa mesa (?). i would like to sit at a cafe with this persona and flick matches at people walking by.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Apparently disjointed events connected in a mesh.. Poetry is about flow and is about substance..This one has ample of both..I was really impressed with your choice of lines..Last two lines my favorite..Good job..Impressed...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how's it working out?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Loved this Amber, great ending. Glad I got to read it tonight. Fantastic writing.

Antonio

Posted 10 Years Ago


the phrases are on time, the movement of the words are real good. this is one of your best poems to me. the evolving process is difficult, yet with a fun that breathes insanity.

Posted 11 Years Ago


these newies are bad a*s beautiful Amber.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Powerful... So deeply moving, in and out of lives and wandering places... Speaks of feelings, of striving desires for more. Seemed like just a glimpse of all there is... all there was...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Amber Victoria Tudor
Amber Victoria Tudor

Lake Forest, CA



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Aspiring writer, professor, championship poker player, world traveler, etc. Enjoy. or not. also, check out my online magazine, more..

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