Skinny

Skinny

A Poem by TheDuraMater

I got what all the girls want
I'm where every boy has been
And if you just step back
You'll see your face again

C-c-c-cutting through the wind
A brand new element to face
I said goodbye to my feelings
Because they're such a waste

Oh, what a waste

Why do you think all of the stars explode?
And where do you think all of that energy goes?
It's breathing inside of us as we touch

Do you still dare to call that love your own
When you're falling asleep every night alone?
It's dying inside of us as we run

I know not what I can do
But just the things that I try
And that is hardly enough
And I still don't know why

I'd love to live every day
Like I'm lost on holiday
Stoned and far away
But we can't, we can't, we can't
It just don't work that way

We can't, we can't, we can't
It just don't work that way
We can't, we can't, we can't
It just don't work that way

I got what all the girls want
I'm where every boy has been

© 2013 TheDuraMater


Author's Note

TheDuraMater
did y'all know that it just don't work that way

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This is really great. I love the way the whole thing flows and how the you could see the personality of the narrator through the whole piece. I love the way this describes love and life as something you can't just manipulate.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ha this is clever, though i still cant decide if you are a girl or a boy ;)
you're right that is not the way it works and we cant live life like that, as seemingly nice as it would be to just be in a dream-state or stoned out of our heads when pain comes knocking.

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheDuraMater

10 Years Ago

"I am a sixteen year old Canadian male"
Tim Piotrowicz

10 Years Ago

haha ok thanks i see now ;)

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TheDuraMater
TheDuraMater

Nova Scotia, Canada



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I am an eighteen year old Canadian male whose free time is mostly dedicated to playing video games, writing and watching various cartoons/TV shows. Also I'm dumb. more..

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