Realizing its a dream

They say when you dream about someone they are missing you
So why is it that in my dream your always dissing me
Making me feel un-wanted and to me its haunting..
I don't know, maybe its just me but i am missing you
im missing you like the oceans would miss the waves if they disappear
Like the wind will miss the air, and im just sitting there, shouting it is not fair
so tell me dream, why must you be so mean when in reality all i want is... You

Author's Note

Ignore grammar, this is for a contest ;)

Reviews

[Constance Claire]

We all fear rejection, and generally those things we want most, our mind will create a million reason why we are not good enough or undeserving.

It is always interesting how dreams and our imagination will translate that. Very interesting poem and some nice imagery.

"Making me feel un-wanted and to me its haunting.." I like this.


Good luck with your contest!

[Boranus]

i liked it, it had an interesting feeling to it, yearning for affection, but getting rejection
disapproval

[TheGhostWriter]

Thank you :)