The Spirit of The Moonlight Forest

A Traveler Wonders though an Endless Forest searching for Something his heart has been missing.

Alone a Traveler Wanders,

Though the Forest So Sublime

The Traveler Ponders

His Journey, His place, His Lifetime

Standing in Beauty undisturbed

Under the Moon, Charming

A Women Preserved

Like a Crystallized Rose, Sparkling  

Hair as White as a Winter Day

With an Angelic Grace

Travelers Worries Fade away

She Approaches with Her Tender Embrace

Our Heart’s beat as one

As time Goes Still

True Feelings Overrun

True Standstill

As her transcendent gaze meets mine

As her sweet lips reach mine

The Stars have finally aligned

our hearts, our very souls entwine

In a Blinding Flash

The World falls away

With Tremendous Backlash

Much to his Dismay

The Traveler Finds himself Back where he always goes

In the Harsh Sun's Day

In the meadows

Alone and Wondering, never to find his way

Author's Note

Ignore Capitalization problems

Reviews

[likeablemicrobe]

I found this really lyrical. And I know that you said to ignore capitalization problems, but I felt like the capitalization led to some interesting play on words... Like "Standing in Beauty" made beauty seem like more than an adjective.... made beauty seem like a tangible person. The scene also reminded me of the old fairy tales where travelers ended up with the fair folk, and after returning home always yearned for that feeling again. I thought it was beautiful. Keep writing for sure. :)

[Bare trees]

This sounds like a nightmare come true. Real nice work here.