Acknowledgement Of Hope

Everybody has their moments. Beautiful ones and not-so-beautiful ones. Those that count are the ones are which weren't beautiful but YOU made them so.

Oblivion. Gloom. Anguish.
Mocks. Disgrace. Heartbreaks.
Helplessness. Estrangement. Loneliness.
Tired of the world’s viciousness,
There you stand, in sadness.
Your own actions become incomprehensible,
Your own people act hysterical.
When everything seems obnoxious and enigmatic,
Try and reach behind the chaotic.
For somewhere in the world, a baby smiles,
After many years, a brother and sister reconcile.
A wife is kissed by her husband,
In a war-prone country, peace is finally sanctioned.

Somewhere behind there is,
A ray of hope,
A silver lining,
A concealed comfort,
A blessing in disguise.

Bliss that you fail to see,
Contentment that you fail to feel,
Love which you fail to comprehend,
and optimism which you fail to apprehend.
See beyond the darkest clouds and you see a clear sky,

Reach beyond the false dispositions and you meet a genuine guy.

Think beyond doom and you think of glory,
Rise up,because you have to make your own beautiful story.

The power resides in YOU,

To get up and see,

That every suffering brings the promise of a life,carefree.
That things have their way,
and then,there will be a brighter today.

So, let go off all the expectations,
and rejoice even in the complications.
For light will always overshadow darkness,
and nothing can stop you from happiness!

Reviews

[Surya pradha]

a poem with great essence and spirit. made me smile. great work here, keep writing!

[Chris]

"off" or perhaps "of"? Both seemingly fit but I am curious.

The lifestyle of - a cup half-full OR half-empty. How we perceive our world depends on just how real that world is and how it interacts and interplays with others' perceptions and realities. Some accept "good" - some expect it, some stare in disbelief, some see nothing at all. A good introspection of your presence.

[TheKratiMittal]

It's "of" what I thought because I feel it needs to be acknowledged.
It is quite true that our perceptions define us.
Thank you for stopping by :)

[Chris]

Anytime... you take care.

[Anahat]

Wow...This was so beautiful....Just one word Breathtaking..
Just keep writing and give us the chance to read such wonderful pieces..
Love Anahat :)

[TheKratiMittal]

I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for your appreciation.
Always grateful, Krati :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

nice attempt krati......the opening lines of your poem are just amazing ....

Oblivion. Gloom. Anguish.
Mocks. Disgrace. Heartbreaks.
Helplessness. Estrangement. Loneliness.

a unique way to start your poems...... concept is also good including the meaning ........nice work

[TheKratiMittal]

Thanks for the kind words:)

[Utkarsh Singh]

ur welcome dear

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The message in the poem could be that we can not control other persons and that by realizing that we have the resources to manage our lives in the right direction then that will make us happy.

[TheKratiMittal]

Absolutely Yes!
You have further deepened the message of the poem.
Thank you :)

[The Quill]

wow, inspirational poetry. amazing use of words :)

[TheKratiMittal]

Thank you for stopping by!

[Akshay Rawal]

Sterling.. An exemplar of optimism in poetry.

[TheKratiMittal]

Thank you,Akshay :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"For light will always overshadow darkness,
and nothing can stop you from happiness!"
Not easy to find hope sometimes. I like the story and the positive and hopeful ending above. We must look for the light in the cover of darkness. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[TheKratiMittal]

Thank you so much,Sir.
I'm glad you stopped by :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Your poetry is outstanding.

[A. Amos]

Poignant, deep and honest write...very strong poetry.

[TheKratiMittal]

Thank you,Amos!

[A. Amos]

You're welcome

[Saddam]

Think beyond doom and you think of glory,
Rise up,because you have to make your own
beautiful story.
The power resides in YOU,

A new ray of morning sun.... you are the rising sun. Beautiful poetry.

[TheKratiMittal]

Thank you for reviewing :)

[Saddam]

My pleasure dear always...