I Like You

I Like You

A Poem by Blue Ivory

I feel I'm letting nature down
When I say I've fallen in love with you
The universe trusted me with a friend
Did it think I was mature enough to handle it?

I stand in front of the mirror
And picture your face
I say, "I don't like you"
So I don't get stuck at 3am
Thinking of you

Is it just the onlooker's opinion
Messing with my head?
Would I not be confused
If they never said a word?

Just because you said I'm worth it
I won't like you
You're a guy who's actually worth it
So I'll do you a favor and not like you

You actually make a girl like ME feel beautiful
So I know you deserve a lot better than that

I want to keep this as the unspoken truth
One that never slips out
Cuz I feel ridiculous at the mere thought
Of me confessing to you.

I'll save you the trouble of rejecting
Or even considering

It's funny. The first time I heard my cousin say
"Someday, you'll meet a guy you KNOW is right for you. You'll fall in love with him. But you'll never be able to tell him."
I laughed out loud. It was the dumbest thing I ever heard!

Now I think, I'm in trouble. My next realization,
This is a beautiful thing that's happening here.
And right now, I'd like to keep it that way:

A secret, that is.

The secret that I love you.

I always knew my day would light up at the presence of my perfect guy.

Or do I just really enjoy your company?

I'm embarrassed. So I'm sorry, but I like you.

© 2012 Blue Ivory


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These feelings are always there in young age ..
you can't not it ...you have no control over it..
I like someone but sometimes they don't like you
or they didn't feel the same besides being friends:)
there is no space for sorry if you are telling the truth
Lovely write..keep writing!! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

11 Years Ago

Thank you! C:
Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

you are always welcome dear!! :)



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This one is so cute and nice!I LOVE it!And I think I know about which guy is this poem ;) But in the same time I find it mature and a really nice way to say to someone-I like you.Great work.It tottaly goes to my favourites! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

11 Years Ago

Thanks, this is exactly the way I feel about him. As in I portrayed EVERYTHING that I feel in here. .. read more
A heartfelt, defenses-down piece of work to which most readers can relate.
Very fine work, Siren!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very positive poem of love. Like is the first and most important step of love. Good to walk slowly into love and friendship. When we rush things. Many of the best steps of life are missed. I like the kind and hopeful emotion in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww this is pretty cute!
i think that this poem can make everyone who's friend zoned feel better,to let them know that its totally fine to be where you are
because once in our live,we go through this phase,where we love someone,but just can't tell them
i find this poem to be one of your bests :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Blue Ivory

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