Never Heal

"Never Heal"

Verse 1:
I don't ever want to fall again
It hurts too much to hear your name
Every moment that I'm awake
The miles between us are still the same

Chorus 1:
Tell me, why you made me let go
If you had no intention to catch me?
And from such a height, my dear
I'm afraid I'll never heal

Verse 2:
Before I met you, I would dream
You woke me up and said I'm worth more
And I believed you, I let go
Leaving me without a home

Chorus 2:
Don't say you'll take care of me
When we both know my heart is too heavy
Said you'd save me, I let you try
Now I'm afraid I'll never heal

Bridge:
I hope the one is the next the boy to makes me call it love
I won't survive another heartbreak
And you don't even know, because I never told you
But you're the one hurting me
Each time that you hold me

Chorus 3:
Don't say you'll take care of me
When we both know my heart is too heavy
Tell me why you made me let go
If you had no intention to catch me
And from such a height, my dear
Now I'm afraid I'll never heal

I don't ever want to fall again

Reviews

[tuvi]

wow... this is so fantastic ....the pain the hurt so beautifully projected ....
its like one of those " I hate realizing I lost something so amazing , I feel even worse when I cant stop thinking about it " ....... poem depicts one those moments when you are alone and burst crying loud and then you realize noone really knows or for matter of fact even cares that you are not really happy ...
Okay let me stop I's getting emotional now and all the feelings the poem put me through are jostling out as words .... amazing write up ...

Thanks for the share....

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks so much for this heartfelt review! I love that I could make you feel all that :D

[Tree]

You can feel the passion the emotion, in this song. Love to hear this sung /with some music ... with that emotion. Well done, Siren

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks so much, Diego! I might make a video of it soon. Once I do, I'll link it to you :)

[Tree]

Would love to see that.

Diego

[Infinite hexes]

I thought i already reviewed this. Anyways yeah this is so freaking depressing it makes me cry :'(

[HaleythePoet]

The raw emotions in this song really captivated me. Very lovely.

[bOhEmIa (mahim)]

Quite innovative. Especially the way you used a heading right before every stanza.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The hearbreak is stirring in the fall... I felt the ache burning in this song. You have written a poignant piece!....with every chorus there is a guarded voice, trying to hold back, from the pain of another pending heartbreak...never to heal. Nice work!

[Kriss_Rose]

This captures heartbreak perfectly. Trust has no strings which makes it all the more scarey to do.

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from the shape to the metaphors to words picking, wonderful poem..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I could see these words being sung by Adele... heartache leaves the longest lasting impression on the heart... as they say "once bitten, twice shy."