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Though I wear this cloak
and hide behind this dark veil
To numb the pain
to fill this void
Finding purpose and solace
to the riddles of the pelting rain .

So I ebb aimlessly
like a ship without a sail
fading, wandering, drifting
farther away from Your shore .

Yet Your light always shines,
burning brightly inside
Beaconing this weary heart
to return home ...

by NeiL ArandA

Author's Note

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[jacob erin-cilberto]

"find your way back, find your way back to my heart) (starship)

your poem reminds me of this song...there is a good melody to that idea of returning home...which is where the heart is...not matter how far we stray.

[NeiL ArandA]

Thanks Jacob again for the read . Unfamiliarity breeds discontent ...so I miss WC ...

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Though I wear this cloak
and hide behind this dark veil
To numb the pain
to fill this void
Finding purpose and solace
to the riddles of the pelting rain .



WOW I simply feel in love
with this piece so beautiful
and so true when we drift away
he yanks us back and pulls us in
and won't let go He see's our hearts.

I loved this such beautiful words


Finding purpose and solace
to the riddles of the pelting rain.




We are a song with out the voice without
the words and a light house without the
light to guide us when we don't have our LORD.



I can relate to this we've all been there
I am nothing without God in my life.

I will favorites this as well will like
to go back in read it very inspiring
many of your pieces are.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.



Blessings. Benita

[NeiL ArandA]

What you just stated here . Makes you everything . For you are doing it for Him and in Him . They have eternal value .

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're are very correct my friend :) I enjoyed this piece thank you for sharing. Blessings. Benita