Wishes

Wishes

A Poem by t.m.
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if only i could fix it

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I wish wishing worked
because 
I'd look for 
every shooting star,
spend everything at wishing wells,
11:11 would be my favorite time of day,
and all of the seeds on every dandelion
would blow away.

© 2016 t.m.


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if wishes were horses, we would all ride

Posted 8 Years Ago


simple yet enticing in its perfect wishes...and 11:11 is my favorite time of the day...love how it looks on the digital....

and i could go broke at wishing wells, for sure.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"and all of the seeds on every dandelion would blow away" life in the throws of death, dandelions... even with their last breath, give back to the world.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 20, 2016
Last Updated on February 20, 2016
Tags: sadness, wishing, love, heartbroken, shooting star, night, stars, 11:11, wishes, i love you

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