Gatelife

Gatelife

A Poem by The Message
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Written for a contest.

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When winter becomes thee
We shall see from afar
The way you truly are.
 

And I believe you'll be
The blackest star
When winter becomes thee.
 

Yes I believe you'll be
In the quickest tar
And a sideborne jar
When winter becomes thee.

© 2009 The Message


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It flows so beautifully and wonderfully. It makes me contemplate who anyone truly is, and what behavior is truly a facade. I really do enjoy it! (along with the rest of your poems! I'm officially a big fan!) :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


What an intriguing write. Loved it! Thank you for submitting
this to Poeticpiers contest. ~ Helena


Posted 14 Years Ago



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The Message
The Message

Hoover/Mobile, AL



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