INSPIRATION.

"Inspire to live"

 

It’s in me…It’s in you,

It’s in an art or a flue,

A subject or a clue,

It’s false and might be true.

 

It’s what and how I feel,

It’s just a way with myself I deal,

For me it’s a synonym of - zeal,

Just like a minute out of continuous thinking wheel.

 

A drop dropping down inspires of being detach,

A drop touching me feels of being attach,

A tear inspires me to feel deep,

A smile inspires me to convert it into a heap.

 

An anger inspire me to be aggressive,

Love & care inspire me to be possessive,

A loss inspires me to be right,

Consecutive losses inspires me to fight,

 

A dropping leaf inspires me to feel the emotion

A flying bird inspires to grab all promotion,

A melancholy sound inspires of feeling strength,

A death inspires me of new life & its length.

 

A cage inspire me to be free,

Helping everyone is the inspiration that I took from a tree,

An accident inspires me to feel the accuracy,

A lucky draw inspires me for its tragedy.

 

So I never wait or do any preparation,

Coz my every single moment is full of inspiration,

That’s why …..I walk alone yet feel crowded,

Because my inspirations are within me, shrouded.

 

 

Author's Note

A solution to every problem..................its "Inspiration to live"

Reviews

[reflectingus]

This poem is inspirational. I love the flow of thoughts, how you took examples from different instances in life, different people and things, and well, it was enjoyable to read. There is always an opportunity for inspiration, everywhere, anytime, and yet, many struggle to find it. Great optimism in those words, very uplifting. I also liked the rhyme scheme, made it catchy, and also elicits the message pretty well.

[Cathy Wattam]

I liked this poem and it is true that inspiration can come from anywhere.

Just a quick note about grammar - "A drop dropping down inspires of being detach,

A drop touching me feels of being attach" I feel should say "detached and attached".

Also a couple of times you've written "inspire" when it should say "inspires"'.

Other than that, a nice poem.

[Thea]

I definitely like the concept and idea of this poem...
It was motivating and your insight came out really nice...
Great work!
:)))

[Manpreet]

Lovely concept beautifully expressed!

[TheAdamBryant]

amazing poetry , very good

[Suditi]

Such an inspiring poem.
What i love the most about this is that, you have managed to seek bring out inspiration from the sad incidents of life also..
The last stanza is a perfect end.
Great message, great poetry.

[Cassie Fraga]

message expressed perfectly and in such style... I love it!!
very nice write indeed my friend!!

[Coyote Poetry]

"A cage inspire me to be free,
Helping everyone is the inspiration that I took from a tree,"
I like the many strong statements in your poem. Inspiration can change a world and the thoughts of many people. A positive poem with some good wisdom. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[I'm Just me:)]

i love it to me i could get lots of inspiration from it and not just for poems also for life :)

[Lagachu]

nice poem... i like the rhyming scheme