My Heart's Capacity

This is just a short (and my first) poem I wrote in like minutes. (I just wanted to check if the error 001 is resolved.

I've packed my love in

Every photon of the sunlight shooting

Spreaded as

Every particle that colours sky blue to pink

Sprinkling as

Invisible dust from wings of hummingbirds

Fixed it

In the stars and moon to give her light in the dark

But where is she hiding?

Is it raining outside?

Author's Note

Contrsuctive criticism is very much welcomed, I'm a learner. Feel free to write any kind of review.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Good work for a first effort. Good use of imagery. Keep writing.

[Aylin]

Thanks a lot!