SOUL SEARCHING

I'm delivering a lot of me in every package
I'm a nomad so I travel with very little baggage
I left a heart to venture out and build a new home
I have no tribe to share this quest so I'm calling alone
Expansion of your mind might help you understand my tongue
Increase my thoughts and let a flow of words spill out my lungs
My soul spills out of me a mile a minute
So he could kill me softly with his song if he spit it
He strummed my pain and the notes resounded in my mind
He sings my life and gives me breath until the end of time
He cut my voyage short when I approached his hidden garden
I called it Eden, he was feeding me when I was starving
Restored my innocence he's given me eternal bliss
Puts a poem upon my lips every time we kiss
He accepted me for me as I was just a stranger
He took a loveless hopeless girl and forever changed her

Author's Note

WHAT DO YOU THINK?

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

Great poem!!! I honestly can't figure out anything else to say but great poem!!!

[Underestimated]

dang. If only every guy was like that!:-P Really nice, sweet, and colorful.

[Ramya]

Awesome! I love these two lines the most:
"He strummed my pain and the notes resounded in my mind"
"Puts a poem upon my lips every time we kiss"

Excellent work. Keep it up!

[Sammie]

As always, just awesome.

[icaros13]

I like it. It's good collectively, but each couplet could nearly stand on its own. I was especially taken with, "Expansion of your mind might help you understand my tongue; Increase my thoughts and let a flow of words spill out my lungs" Good write.