lonesome fate.

lonesome fate.

A Poem by Vanessa van Gersie

Moments pass
Our memories fade
The years become a constant reminder of our lonesome fate
As we journey into a world so uncertain
In search of a life that is somewhat hidden

My soul yearns so passionately
For the days when it was just you and me
floating in a bubble of uncouth youth
Dreaming carelessly in a leather of euphoria
But those days are long gone

Regrets,wise mistakes and lonesome souls
Are all that's left to show
Of a past so blissful and untamed

As the moments pass
And our memories fade
Don't forget to remember me.

© 2014 Vanessa van Gersie


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Such a beautiful wistfulness to this write... how our memories that we hold within our hearts can fade just as we do from this earth. The nostalgia felt upon revisiting the memories of lost love can linger for a life time and we can only wish that those we love so dearly will not forget the love we gave them. Divine work...truly enjoyed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vanessa van Gersie

9 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)



Reviews

This poem brings to life all that I have been through with my last love. Exactly how I feel...Don't forget to remember me. Lovely!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautifully written poem. I'll definitely add this to my favorites. I like your poems very much because the messages portrayed in them seem to speak to everyone. They are very relatable! If only such close connections could outlive death! If only memories were everlasting...

Great poem

Thanks for sharing

W.H.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vanessa van Gersie

9 Years Ago

I know right if only memories could be everlasting but no matter how close we are such relations nev.. read more
Such a beautiful wistfulness to this write... how our memories that we hold within our hearts can fade just as we do from this earth. The nostalgia felt upon revisiting the memories of lost love can linger for a life time and we can only wish that those we love so dearly will not forget the love we gave them. Divine work...truly enjoyed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vanessa van Gersie

9 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

232 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on May 15, 2014
Last Updated on May 15, 2014

Author

Vanessa van Gersie
Vanessa van Gersie

About
I am an idealist at heart and a pathetic fanatic of feminism. I hail from a multicultural background and may be of dutch descent. I am ball-a-phobic and love to travel but I have a burnt passport so a.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


~Never~ ~Never~

A Poem by Robbie~xoxo~