Prevarication

Would you ever dare me? face  to face
 you pitiful beast
Who preys on the ignorant souls of men
feeds on their very intellect and treads upon the wisest of souls
would you ever dare me?face to face
you treacherous,most malignant thing
who tortures,dehumanizes and humiliates our sense of pride
by taking away the breath you never gave
leaving us in a worm infested hand made cave
would you ever dare me?face to face
you thoughtless angel
creating havoc where there should be peace
And war where there should be none
disfiguring the joyful order which was once made
would you ever dare me?
or inflict upon me the wishes of your ill mind
the hell that rages in our world
just because you dared too many
                          hurt too many
and turned too many into robots of your devised plan
But you have already dared me
 that is why we have to meet.... face to face.

Reviews

[Wall Hermitt]

Hi Vanessa! You've constructed a wonderful structure, with wonderful wording and metaphors. I find this very astonishing. Love the repetitive questions circularly drawing our attention back to the main idea. The uniqueness of your writing continues to impress.

[garrshaw]

Oh I love this a lot... You are a wonderful Poet Vanessa

[Honey-Bee]

Prevarication...Is an ugly thing and can create havoc where there should be peace. I love the line Would you ever dare to meet me face to face? Nice poem!

[Vanessa van Gersie]

Thanks Chris for the review.It's a joy to have readers acknowledge what you write,however minute.I hope to see more of you and read your work as well.Again, thank you for reviewing.

[Girl With A Pen]

"the hell that rages in our world
just because you dared too many
hurt too many"

Your writing style is unique and your poetry really speaks to me. :) Wonderful job

[Vanessa van Gersie]

Thanks your compliment exhilarates me. It's really a pleasure to be praised in such a manner; I appreciate it.