![]() What???A Poem by A_Prolific_Writer![]() An Inspirational Poem![]() What do you mean my poem would come in last place? Typo's galore, give me a break I know I used spell check
Geez, I just wanted a little feedback, not buck shot What? Maybe if I re-write it, you'll consider its worth
Hey! You don't see a bulls eye on my heart do you? What do you mean that I’m taking this too personal?
You just trashed the best poem that I have ever written! Now you have the nerve to ask ask me to re-write it for you?
Well mom, I am not dropping by and I'm not re-writing it either I'm hurt, insulted and offended that you didn't like my poem!
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Added on December 15, 2016 Last Updated on December 15, 2016 Author![]() A_Prolific_WriterLodi, CAAboutMy name is Raymond and I am a 63 year old disabled veteran living in Lodi, California. I have been an unpublished writer/poet for 25 years and my author website is www.westernfrontierebooks.com. My ge.. more..Writing
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