What???

What???

A Poem by A_Prolific_Writer
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An Inspirational Poem

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What do you mean my poem

would come in last place?

Typo's galore, give me a break

I know I used spell check

                                                           

Geez, I just wanted a little

feedback, not buck shot

What? Maybe if I re-write

it, you'll consider its worth

 

Hey! You don't see a bulls

eye on my heart do you?

What do you mean that I’m

taking this too personal?

 

You just trashed the best poem

that I have ever written!

Now you have the nerve to ask

ask me to re-write it for you?

 

Well mom, I am not dropping by

and I'm not re-writing it either

I'm hurt, insulted and offended

that you didn't like my poem!

 

© 2003 Raymond Cook (All rights reserved)

© 2016 A_Prolific_Writer


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A_Prolific_Writer
A_Prolific_Writer

Lodi, CA



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My name is Raymond and I am a 63 year old disabled veteran living in Lodi, California. I have been an unpublished writer/poet for 25 years and my author website is www.westernfrontierebooks.com. My ge.. more..

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