At The End Of The Day

Today I walked

And talked

And stopped

And turned around

Some times

I'm sure

So why can't I

Remember?

Reviews

[Nette]

I can relate---Happens to me all the time,
I like the brevity of the poem. It befits the subject
of the brevity of memory. The lack of detail adds to the feeling of frustration of not remembering.

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Thank you for the review!! I enjoy shorter poems as well because they are useful in representing fleeting thoughts :)

[Manu]

Simple and short poem. This happens with everyone I guess. Sometimes we just don't remember and sometimes things like Deja Vu too happens.
Interesting poem.

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Yeah it's a pretty common issue to not remember what all you do in a day. I think its interesting that we can do something and never think about it again because our brain decided it was unimportant. Thanks for the review :)

[FreedomFighter]

clear cut and straight to the point, i enjoyed reading this

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Thanks for the review! :)

[FreedomFighter]

of course!