Divided

I wrote this in school on 4/24/2009.

Have I been forgotten?

My love, am I friend or foe?

I'd been fosaken, long ago,

apart from all I had since dwelt

suppressing emotions I should have felt

holding deep the soured tears

turned instead to bitter fears

alone I struggled, while all else laughed

Curse and gift, I've missed my chance to learn your craft

don't you see? Aren't you delighted?

we are surely now divided.

Reviews

[Gustan Joseph]

Cool, I like it.

[nocturnalbeast]

hmmm...That was nice!!! It made me reflect on the emotions within this piece!