She's the one

Love poem about this girl I'm falling in love with but can't tell her because she's not ready.

She's the playful little kid who never grew up

And yet more mature than most

She's a good girl with a fiery soul and a big heart

Dreams bigger than most yet still realistic

With a spark in her crystal blue eyes that'll never fade

The way words hang off of her beautiful lips

Makes me melt in my seat and want to listen all day

With her long brunette hair that falls just the right way

She's sweeter that the tea that she mistakenly gets

She's the song you stay in the car for when you get home

She doesn't have a clue how beautiful I think she is

She's confident and daring yet shy in her own right

She's wonderful yet just out of reach

Though I feel the gap closing and drifting away all at the same time

If it were up to me we'd be entrapped in an embrace all day

And I could tell her how I truly feel

Author's Note

Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Manjhi]

how utterly romantic! I appreciate the spaced out lines, they may not be for everyone but they surely work for me.

[LittleBeeKat]

those feelings are so precious! she has to read this!

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I think you got some feelings out on paper. The next step is to get them out with her. I think you can do it. Good luck.

[Gabbie Smolarek]

This is fantastic! If someone asked me out by showing me this, it would be very hard to say no. Good work :)