The Girl With The Abstract Face

The Girl With The Abstract Face

A Poem by Deron Alexis
"

what it might be like to meet someone who actually gets you

"

The Girl With

The Abstract Face

 

While walking through the woodland

Searching for myself

I followed the sound of sobbing

And of tears wasted on the floor

 

Her hair flowed before her

As she sat on a fallen log

A storm cloud on her head

Her hands riddled in scars

Her heart split asunder

She held a wilting rose

Picked before last spring

Sitting waiting

on that which never came

 

I dared to get closer

Her pain calling me to her

And put my hand on her shoulder

She raised her head

And made of scars

Her face was grafted  

Glyphic and unreal

A picture of her sorrow

 

Faded burning faceless

Until she carved the face in

“Would you even care!?

No one cared before

Nobody knows

What it’s like!”

 

I put my hand on the scars

The grooves that made the frown

The permanent teardrop

She carved in hopelessness

Then held her hand

Cut with rose thorns

And from when the blade slipped

Put it to my face

Synthetic made of plastic

Numb docile toxic

So that she saw

We were the same

© 2012 Deron Alexis


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This is so deep and meaningful and the ending is perfect. One of the best I have seen on this site.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

ol thanks glad you enjoyed it really i did put allot of myself into this one
god ! amazing , i like the fact that you two were a like
well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

thanx for reading really i appreciate it
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

11 Years Ago

welcome :)
like it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

thanks
Potent writing there my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

wow thanx, really you don't know how much i wanted to remove this poem and add some literary devices
This was just so amazing, wow! I don't even know what to say about this poem, it was just great:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

really!XD
i was going to remove it today thanx for reading and reviewing its good to hear what.. read more
kimmy

11 Years Ago

I liked this poem very much..I will look and see what else you have:)
Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

thanx

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Added on December 12, 2012
Last Updated on December 16, 2012

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Deron Alexis
Deron Alexis

Cunupia village, Caroni, Trinidad and Tobago



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Been gone from writers cafe a while. Dunno if im back for good. Im hoping im not as much of a little s**t as my 16 year old self was. Lets see how this goes i guess more..

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