Angelicus

ANGELICUS

Hark herald behold!!

Thy beauty rare

Thou hast all their traits

but wings

 

Thou can be so sure

Thy voice dost sooth my scars

For the very words

Spoken by thy lips

Drives my poems to envy

 

Oh blessed is thy clothing

That holds you near

Oh blessed are thy mirrors

Privileged to reflect

Thy gracious form

Oh herald sorrow do they

For they can’t tell

Of the silk and satin

That is thy skin

Or the wise depth in thine eyes

 

Pax Angelicus

Ave Angelicus

So couth thy face

Like meadows in their august

And deep art thy thoughts

Like the autumn woodland

Such autumn like the fall of thy hair

Flowing down thy frame

 

Thine is my heart

My love, you are my love

Oh my heart

Love and chocolate

In it is wrapped

Forever and eternity

Always and devotion

And as angels live forever

I am immortal

In the love I harbour for thee

 

And in the night

I wish for thee

Oh grace me

Embrace me

Save the heart I’ve given to you  

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

hows my Shakespearean English coming along? tried something new

Reviews

[The Dreamer]

meadows in their august , august woodland, august like fall of your hair - usually beauty is always compared to spring , bright and blossoming, everything so live. but you compared it with august, when everything is orange and falling- it worked really well! the image that was painted in my mind was a beauty that is serene, wise and graceful , a beauty that runs deeper than spring. somehow spring looks frivolous and skin deep to me , now that i think of it! and i Loved the 3rd par -- it was beautiful!!

[Deron Alexis]

thanks really glad you liked it thanks for reading

[Balkaran Sidhu]

this is beautiful work...i like reading Shakespearean kind of stuff..and it was pretty much what i wanted to read right now..excellnt work

[Deron Alexis]

thanx dude glad it made your moment

[MOON]

Lovely Shakespearen english write original and I love the chocolate thrown in.

[Deron Alexis]

can't have love without at least one chocolate kiss now can we XD

[MOON]

For sure!

[Frieda P]

Whoa, don't even read my stuff anymore, this is wicked good. I'm not a huge Shakespearean buff 'where for art thou?' in my sock poem was about as good as it gets! It's really quite awe inspiring and the imagery is over the top wicked good. Kudos, you are quite talented.

[Deron Alexis]

thanx i appreciate it XD

[Frieda P]

I'm serious, can't go from 'fat a*s' to Shakespeare without a complex! ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

lol XD who knows maybe Shakespeare loved a curvy woman :)

[Frieda P]

hahah doth be your derriere like a full moon? lol

[Deron Alexis]

lol hahahah oh the vastness sublime of thy posterior

[Frieda P]

hahahahahaha good one!

[Frieda P]

You need to write a tongue in cheek Shakespearean piece! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

yours too full moon priceless

[Deron Alexis]

um explain what you mean by tongue in cheek O.o

[Frieda P]

Sarcasm....not intended to be taken seriously.

[Deron Alexis]

oh lol that would be very funny i'll start working on it

[Frieda P]

ha, can't wait for that one!

[Deron Alexis]

hey um send me a request 4 'where for art thou?' in my sock please thanx

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

Are you a Christian? The only reason I ask this is because this has such a strong Christian message. Its really bold and powerful, making it a really good read!

[Deron Alexis]

lol ima christian but thats not really what i was headed for i did the poem this way cause Shakespearean english and the tudor age has allot dramatic significance

[rnuff]

wow I love this!
This is really good, i love the Shakesperean english.
amazing job!

[Deron Alexis]

thanx allot for stopping by

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

I told you before , you just keep surprising me :)
and well done , keep it up ...

[Deron Alexis]

thanks for reading glad you liked it

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

welcome :)

[Deron Alexis]

hey when is your next next work coming XD

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

i don't know , i am really kinda sad , i tried to write something but i couldn't
i need inspiration :'( give me one ...

[Deron Alexis]

giving your heart to someone(LIKE LOVE) but making it sound gruesome and literal like a heart being physically removed. U Like?

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Hmm well i don't know if i can picture ugly and gruesome things in my poem , i don't know , I'll try but i feel that my poems are delicate and soft and i don't know I'll give it a shot :) thank you any way , maybe if you lend me your brain i could do it :P

[Deron Alexis]

want me to message you a stanza we cud make it a collab just a suggestion if you would like :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

sure lets do it :)

[Deron Alexis]

cool

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

;)

[scripted]

i love the shakespearean english... it flows nice this piece was really good!!! yours truely

[Deron Alexis]

thanks for reading cool profile name XD