It's Our Future We Bestow!

It's Our Future We Bestow!

A Poem by Tommy

 History is the chilling forewarn   

 surrounding an icy heart;  

 lost since this the judgments start,

 together astray forlorn.

 All as one we've pricked this thorn,

 loosed tears froze like crimsoned art.

 Glimpses twist insight's depart    

 as Light's grief upon unborn

 truths pain this so worthy toil.

 Will this brood hear the echo

 or who truly heeds to know?

 Blinded gifts of turmoil 

 offering children's hopes forego.

 It's our future we bestow!  

© 2011 Tommy


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You have some true depth of thought here with a tang of truth that is both bitter and refreshing. I do not think that I have told you how much I love your writing...but I definitely do. You are q force to be reckoned with. this was very good, loved it.

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You have some true depth of thought here with a tang of truth that is both bitter and refreshing. I do not think that I have told you how much I love your writing...but I definitely do. You are q force to be reckoned with. this was very good, loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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very poignant..and relevant...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is chilling work.
It's one that will stick in my mind.
Your warnings show great concern
for your fellow man.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmm....so very sad.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on December 10, 2010
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Sandy, UT



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