"Journey"

Another inspiration from the likes of Ed. Drawn from his piece "a-maze-ing" http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/edhart7/668621/

I have been taken on the journey of life,

and although

I'm longing for so much more,

I realize what has been

is a lesson,

and being able to live is a gift

given through a magical

vast expression;

                            "Yes!" It is enough,

because I realize,

my travels have just begun...

Reviews

[Ms. Gruye]

smirk. You've really emulated Ed here, Tommy, even down to the oddly spaced verse break. You've also got his tone of introspection. Sometimes, when pieces are written in tribute to or inspired by, we can get lost in the tone and style and forget to add our own hallmarks.

here this is not the case. This is still you!! Congrats

[Emily B]

happy trails and travelling mercies then . . .

there is always more to learn

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

Very nice =D It takes a lot for someone to finally realise and understand the lesson and see that this is enough. To continue to strive for the unreachable leaves that which is right there for us to enjoy and learn from out of reach.