Unnamed Fear

Unnamed Fear

A Poem by GTVile
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More lyrics for the upcoming album.

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Suff’ring from the Unnamed Fear,

Knowing that my end is near,

I grab for life and try to fight,

Searching for the fading light.

 

This lost life, was it lived in vain?

This Nightmare can’t begin again,

Pay for ills my hands have wrought,

The long lost joys I’ve always sought,

 

Brought me here to end this day,

Every debt I will repay,

With blood for broken hearts and lies,

The sprit here within me dies.

© 2011 GTVile


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This is a great piece. The character could be in any number of positions in their lives, but i felt as though the character were in limbo, between life and death -- trying to figure out if following the light is worth leaving everything else behind, and in the end -- light wins.

nice work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Suffering from the unamed fear..I love it..it says so much and I love it.. I too would enjoy hearing this...xxxx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really like it c: Great flow, good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The rhythm flows very nicely. Would be awesome to hear this set to music :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 23, 2011
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