Suicidal Act

Hurting, anguish, suffering,
All I can feel is death,
My life's on constant buffering,
And I can't catch my breath.

I can't get happy,
I can't stop the pain,
So I end all my suffering,
With a bullet to my brain.

Author's Note

Came up with this while doing a history project...enough said

Reviews

[Xx_Mizfit_xX]

Interesting history inspired poem, love it!

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Wow, you have no idea how much this poem drives into my heart. All the way to the core. Great work keep it up!

[Lydia]

I really like this even though it feels odd saying that about something so morbid. Nevertheless, it is beautifully written. It seems like the best ideas come to mind when you're supposed to be thinking about something else.

[Odayin]

Haha well I'm glad I inspire you with good last lines that end things badly lol

[Crifa]

It is a short little newspaper for WWII but I got home late from track and now I'm stuck with this

[TheReal]

Short, Sweet, To The Point. And ONLY History Projects can cause this pain! Lol

[Tasha]

Wow, this was amazing. What was your history project?

[Crifa]

I bet the last line is your favorite part...get that bull from you

[Odayin]

Hahahaha in love the inspiration we get! But anyway I like this one: short and sweet!