Suicidal Act

Suicidal Act

A Poem by Crifa

Hurting, anguish, suffering,
All I can feel is death,
My life's on constant buffering,
And I can't catch my breath.

I can't get happy,
I can't stop the pain,
So I end all my suffering,
With a bullet to my brain.

© 2012 Crifa


Author's Note

Crifa
Came up with this while doing a history project...enough said

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Interesting history inspired poem, love it!


Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, you have no idea how much this poem drives into my heart. All the way to the core. Great work keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this even though it feels odd saying that about something so morbid. Nevertheless, it is beautifully written. It seems like the best ideas come to mind when you're supposed to be thinking about something else.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha well I'm glad I inspire you with good last lines that end things badly lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a short little newspaper for WWII but I got home late from track and now I'm stuck with this

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short, Sweet, To The Point. And ONLY History Projects can cause this pain! Lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this was amazing. What was your history project?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I bet the last line is your favorite part...get that bull from you

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hahahaha in love the inspiration we get! But anyway I like this one: short and sweet!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 18, 2012
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Tags: death, suicide, bullet, suffering, anguish, pain, hurting

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