My Guardian Angel

You are my angel,
My heavenly gift,
Sent from above,
God's graceful bliss.
Saving me from my sins,
Your soul's generous kiss.

I used to have faith,
A heart just as yours,
And truth spilled out of me,
Leaking from every pore.

Somewhere I got lost,
Wandered from God,
And darkness found me,
Making me flawed.
I drowned the little voice,
The one that challenged my action.
It used to make me right,
But I now have a different reaction.
Instead of listening I do the opposite,
I stop being me.
I become a fake,
A demon I'll be.

At least that's what was like before you,
You are a chalice of kindness and truth.
You can now be my conscience,
The priest behind the booth.
You lead me to God,
You have me do right.
Girl without you,
I would have never found the light.

Author's Note

About someone very special to me who has changed who I am for the better. She is my guardian angel and I hope to never lose her.

Reviews

[Odayin]

I love the way the stanzas are set up in this one. So uneven in length, but yet so perfectly done. You must really have found someone very special in order to change you so much and inspire you to write this wonderful piece.
I really enjoyed the relation in it all. Just use an angel to represent someone purely justifies the true meaning they must bestow upon your mind, soul, and heart and I enjoyed every word of it. To go with the symbolism and use ancient words such as "chalice" just beckoned the imagery all the more and really helped the meaning and setting bring the power they had possessed.
I can see why this is one of your favorite, keep it up, this was great