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A Poem by Chip
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I know the titles a little cheesy. But focus on the poem :)

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How the years have passed,

I went from first to last.

How the years have passed,

You rose from last to first.

 

The sweet times we shared,

How our friendship flared.

There were no bitter times forecast,

You and I had such a blast.

 

All good times come to an end,

Our friendship we cannot amend.

All bad times come to a split,

Your betrayal you will not admit.

© 2012 Chip


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The Irish skill with rhyme and rhythm is certainly held true for your writings! I admire such a talent for it is not one that I myself have.

I loved this piece it is very well written and it is not sad but rather poignant, you are not left feeling at all depressed but simply enlightened as to the nature of relationships. I will admit though I did not want it to end, it seemed incomplete slightly like their should be just one more stanza bringing the piece together. That could be of course because I was enjoying it so much.

Thank you again for sharing. And congratulations on another great piece!

A.E.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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An awesome friendship, destroyed. Such a shame, but it made an awesome poem! Keep up the great work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brief but to the point. Very well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Irish skill with rhyme and rhythm is certainly held true for your writings! I admire such a talent for it is not one that I myself have.

I loved this piece it is very well written and it is not sad but rather poignant, you are not left feeling at all depressed but simply enlightened as to the nature of relationships. I will admit though I did not want it to end, it seemed incomplete slightly like their should be just one more stanza bringing the piece together. That could be of course because I was enjoying it so much.

Thank you again for sharing. And congratulations on another great piece!

A.E.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's good! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chip
Chip

Newry, United Kingdom



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Hello! I have a fairly massive/strong interest in computers, and a love affair with Tomb Raider. As for my poetry, I use it as a way to let out my feelings. :) more..

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