Blue

Modern Haiku

Color of despair --

pigment of struggle --

shade of discovery.

Author's Note

This is a Haiku I wrote last year about the color blue (what it signifies).

Reviews

[Nesha]

It's interesting that you wrote something about the color blue. The poem definitely signifies what the color blue is; precisely...

Exquisite...

[jodi sharp]

even though this is short it has alot af meaning i think it is just a Spontaneous felling that you had to get out

[justjenn_2u]

Blue, ironic that the color is dismal yet motivational. I enjoyed your perceptiveness to color penned so short and to the point.

[larryb]

Nice i liked

[Virellius an Fiach]

I like. Haiku is my personal favorite, so... :)

[Lorraine Pearson]

I hate that blue is considered a "color of despair." Its so soothing. Interesting that the sky reflects blue...food for thought. Nice haiku!
~Lorraiyne

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Very well written. Great job.