Your world of creative writing takes your readers to different part of the world, that is form of magic and your spell...this write was deep and raw yet close to reality...you my friend are extremely talented...
Wow, I'm quit taken with this dark poem. I can feel the strong painful emotions that lead one down the path of such dark journeys. Superb poem and well written!
Very dark and impressive poem. The journey across the River Styx to the land of suicides and breathtaking and horrifying at the same time. Your dark story is very compelling.
wow...and i just picture that graveyard...and the poets lying there...plath, sexton, jarrell, berryman...and others who just couldn't write themselves out of that space..and got suffocated by the constant dark thoughts.
When Venus gets too close catfish have been known to come up out of the water onto the shore, feed awhile, then go back in.
It's business as usual in the Apocalypse. And business is very good right.. more..