The Unsettled Darkness

The unsettled darkness could not hold her
It was elusive, like ebony gauze
No substance that had any strength
Nothing to give her pause

The unsettled darkness unfolded wide
But it held little, could offer nothing
She moved through it without effort
To her it was empty, just maddening

The unsettled darkness howled with pain
She noticed it not at all
For her something much stronger tempted
For her true darkness and blood did call

Reviews

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Cool vampire tale. Very well written. Like the dark chill in the air as I read this.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

You're welcome.

[Black Cat Fever]

I like this. A unique vampire poem. Fantastic work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork was given life by the good description. You create create of myth and fear. Thank you Tina for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

Thanks for reading and reviewing Coyote Poetry. It is much appreciated by me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Star Wolf]

this is an unusual vampire poem. I like its uniqueness. Awesome work here.

[genocide]

very dark is this talking about her thirst or the seductive hold that the night holds

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Coyote Song]

Love this dark vampire poem. The darkness seems comforting yet not comforting at ll but cold and painful, but her world none the less. Excellent poem.