Full Moon Betrayal

Full Moon Betrayal

A Poem by Tina Kline
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A collaboration with Sean M. Addams.

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The full moon hung low in the silvery sky

Small dark bats go slithering by

The path led forward with no coming back

Should I go is the answer that I lack

 

He hates me that’s all I do know

Fake was the love that he did show

I’ll kill him for what he did to me

Him dead is what I wish to see

 

Overhead the sky is turning shades of red

Like the blood I wish to spill to see him dead

The aurora was a beautiful sight to behold

But it’s his life that I want so desperately to see fold

 

His undead bite left an unholy mark

Made me become one with the dark

No more sunlight my eyes will ever conceive again

Mirror shows no reflection just bleeding cracks of sin

I’ll be the devil persecuting him for his greatest mistake

Drain his blood, set him on fire and through his heart I’ll put a stake

No more evil to walk the dying earth as I watch him turn to dust

Sorry my maker should never created or gave me your trust

Now hopefully the blood red moon will set me free

With my own human eyes the sun I pray to see

If not every vampire will feel my wrath under a full moon of betrayal

I’ll take my own life and see all you creatures of the night in hell!!!

 

 

 

 

© 2011 Tina Kline


Author's Note

Tina Kline
This is another fantastic collaboration with Sean M. Addams.

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A deliciously dark piece with vivid imagery thru~out.... Great collaboration by you and Sean~ kudos to you both!



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

One awesome write! One awesome vampire poem you two created. The anger and rage is powerful in this. I think there could me more to her story too!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! She has quite the rage going on, thirst for revenge is powerful. I must say this is one impressive collaboration. I really enjoyed reading it. I think there is a part two here if you wanted.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is one really cool and well written vampire poem. She sure is mad and with good reason. Love the darkness in this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's good to see you both still collaborating :)
A frightful, delightful poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you two outdid yourself with this one...this was dynamite with great sense of passion...dark story, but very good writing...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this turned out great and I like how it kind of tells a story within the poem... kudos to both of us on this one ... great collabration we have ... and many more to come...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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