You Used To Be

You Used To Be

A Poem by Tomi

There’s a book of sad stories where my heart used to be
Music, art, love, hate and who we used to be
There’s a space in history where we used to be
Too bad, you forgot the person you used to be

© 2013 Tomi


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At first I was a bit thrown with the four line rhyme with the infinitive. But the more I read this, the more I like it.Nice write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank You :)
a lot said in four lines :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
It is sad when we forget who we were. We become empty shells with with no purpose. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Stunning work,Tomi

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Tomi
Tomi

Nigeria



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