Rage

Rage

A Poem by Tomi

I often felt inferior but barely showed my complex/

words can't really describe: it's complex/

i blew things out of proportion and took words out of context/

i guess i lost my way, yes: that i confess/

A wise man said a silent fool is perceived as wise/

i found an escape in silent pain and writing/

And sometimes a tear would fall from my eyes/

but the victory is worth all the fighting/

this light of mine is no longer little/

everything changes when you grow up/

not when you're 13, 18, 40 or no longer single/

everything changes when you grow up/

fear and all his friends still come knocking/

but i've erased the writings off that page/

the windows to doubt are all broken/

but sometimes silence is my only form of rage/

© 2012 Tomi


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Silence had it advantages and can destroy you from the inside out. I learn better to say nothing if all I have is negative. Positive thoughts and kind words are always needed. I like the thoughts and wisdom to be learn from the poem. Rage lead to no-where. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is beautiful. I really can't critique this at all. I love it! =) Excellent job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Profound! Very well written! Great poem...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank you so Much
Silence had it advantages and can destroy you from the inside out. I learn better to say nothing if all I have is negative. Positive thoughts and kind words are always needed. I like the thoughts and wisdom to be learn from the poem. Rage lead to no-where. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great write. I love every line :) VERY nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love this poem! I can relate to it in a way. You're a good writer!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tomi
Tomi

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