Killing Me Softly

An Acrostic

Kisses so passionate they linger for days causing

Illicit thoughts to run through my mind

Leaving me thinking of you daily

Longing for the moment my

Intentions to marry you creates that reality and a

New life together under

God begins...

 

Miles and miles separate us... my

Earth stands still until you return.

 

Sad goodbyes

Obscure our future but

Faith in what we have remains strong,

Tames my fears and reminds me of how much I

Love

You.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The set-up with the words and poem is outstanding. A beautiful poem. Kind and full of love.
Coyote

[cest la vie]

Such a beautiful love poem. Tender without the usual overkill.
Nicely done!!

[Blackbirdsong]

Oh Torey this is wonderful. There is so much love, passion, longing, and yes faith in the possibility of love throughout this. I can see that you wrote this from the heart and I can only hope the lady in question loves you as much :)

[Lovesleftovers]

Fantastic! This, to me at least, is a difficult form of poetry, but you've achieved it so beautifully. I love it! Thanks for sharing your lovely poem and thank you for the wonderful review as well. Brightest Blessings to you!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful acrostic. I have yet to attempt this style of writing but I have read many and yours is indeed my favorite so far. Quite lovely and heartfelt sentiments. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Light,
Siddartha

[T]

Wow! that was great! I loved every line. Good job.

[Teenage poet]

This is so wonderful and gorgeous poem.

[Poetic82]

How wonderfully beautiful. Oh to be loved in this way is every womans dream. Well written, and well received. I like this one alot.

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Okay,
So you had me caught up in that poem. How beautiful. I truly enjoyed that work of art.