Nothing

Nothing

A Poem by Bri
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Just something I thought of while in school with my cruel classmates.

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The walls are closing in.

I can feel your eyes burning into my soul.

You smile.

Your eyes demand what I can't give.


You try to break me,

but I'm already broken.


You try to hurt me,

but I'm already in pain.


You try to take the little things I have,

but I've already lost the power to use them.


You can't take anything from me,

because I have nothing.

© 2014 Bri


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Nice work, Bri
Keep it up, I enjoy reading your posts

Posted 10 Years Ago


Deep emotions , so manny in this one pice love it =')

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This goes deep with me. I feel the pain, the sadness, the sudden realization that you are actually your own worst enemy and no one can hurt you as much as you hurt yourself.....very well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful feelings in this one...Bravo.....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bri

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...............

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Bri
Bri

Writer's City , CA



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