Does it?

Does it?

A Poem by Bri
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I know I haven't been on and I'm trying to get back to my old habits!

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Does it make me a bad person to be weak?

To fall into temptation?


I can't help who or what I am,

no matter how hard I try.


Does it make me needy to wish for followers?

For people to support me?


Does it make me seem lonely when I sit alone?

When all of my supporters have left me dry?


I'm still here,

but you make me feel invisible.


They say I'm unique, that everyone is unique but,

doesn't that mean no one is?


Am I just caught in a thick wave of symmetry?

Of alikeness?


I ask myself these questions everyday and yet,

I am no closer to the answer than I was ten years ago.

© 2014 Bri


Author's Note

Bri
Please let me know what you think! I really do love your opinions!

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Honestly I don't know what you really were referencing to but the way I felt reading this poem I could relate .Its like after while I feel to like I go unnotice for my work but is that wrong .I like how this work made me feel it had a real sense of feeling towards it you know.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wonderful..................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honestly I don't know what you really were referencing to but the way I felt reading this poem I could relate .Its like after while I feel to like I go unnotice for my work but is that wrong .I like how this work made me feel it had a real sense of feeling towards it you know.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some good questions. This was a very good read...Thank you for sharing...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Bri

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