When I look

When I look

A Poem by Tracie Skarbo

 

When I look into your eyes
I see pain and confusion
At the same time I see
A handsome young man
A timid little boy
I wonder
What your life was like…
 
When I look into your hands
Where mine almost always are
I see strong large hands
Where little boys once were
I wonder
What your life was like…
 
When I look at your arms
I see big muscular arms
Which hold me tight
Again I wonder
Were they used to climb trees maybe?
 
“Will I ever know? Will you ever tell me?” I ask
You just put your finger to your
Lips pulling me near…
Then you kiss me like a man
With a hint of a little boy…
 

© 2009 Tracie Skarbo


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Thats so how it is when we meet someone later in life. We wonder how our life would have been like with that person, how they were like growing up, what were their fears, their triumphs, their worries, how did they become who we know them to be now? We will never know, but it doesn't really matter, we can spend the rest of our lifetime sharing that part of our lives with each other.

Beautiful as always Tigra.
Antonio


Posted 14 Years Ago


Everyone of us is more then meets the eye and I really love again how you so emotions of wonderment as you try to see deeper into the soul of a loved one with admiration and curiosity.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very cute amazing piece.
It is amazing how this describes the majority of the male race.
Excellent job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Man/Boy I think they are one in the same. If we are lucky we get to hold onto to some of those innocent childhood traits/qualities. This is a beautifully written piece. Very tender, warm.

Lynne

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 19, 2009

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Tracie Skarbo
Tracie Skarbo

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