When Watching Women- Excerpt

This is part of a larger work that is still being edited.

I know this woman; she is... 

The kindest parts of my soul,

the bravery

I lack 

in waking life;

She's the product of desire;

blemishing and burning every time 

poison trickles into my blood,

spilled from that evil gremlins mouth;

living in shadow, tucked away

beneath my breast bone,

harbored above my heart

where real damage can be done.

Reviews

[Rahul]

what's exactly a reality of life you know it we;lll, i liked two lines
She's the product of desire;
blemishing and burning every time ..nice writing and having some great depth of yours. great job, nicely penned.