Heaven's Calling

Haven't you heard yet?

I've been bleeding for a while

nothing can save me

no, nothing can save me now

so don't hold your breath

cause you'll be waiting for quite some time

nothing can save you

I'm the only one who can save you now

we both know

how this is gonna go

so save us the trouble and slit your throat

cause we both know

how I let this go

so I'll save us the trouble and tie the rope

around my heart

till I lay lifeless in the dark

and everything we wanted falls apart

when did you hear it?

when did your heart finally break in two?

nothing could save you

but I tried to save you now

I was holding my breath

cause I didn't want to die for you

but nothing could save me

no, nothing could save me anyhow

we both know

how this is gonna go

so save us the trouble and slit your throat

cause we both know

how I let this go

so I'll save us the trouble and tie the rope

around my heart

till I lay lifeless in the dark

and everything we wanted falls apart

we could have made it with a little concentration

we could have avoided this mangled devastation

we could have made it with a little more devotion

we could have changed this negative emotion

we could have made it with a little concentration

we could have avoided this mangled devastation

we could have made it with a little more devotion

we could have changed this negative emotion

but we ended up lying here

now heaven's calling out to us dear

we both know

how this is gonna go

so save us the trouble and slit your throat

cause we both know

how I let this go

so I'll save us the trouble and tie the rope

around my heart

till I lay lifeless in the dark

and everything we wanted falls apart

you shouldn't have died for me when I died for you

cause what good would that do

you shouldn't have died for me when I died for you

cause what good does that do

but I'll see you again when it's through.

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

this was beautiful....

i like this a lot

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review some of my poems!

[Travis Prino]

thank you. glad you liked it. i'll definitely check some of yours out.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I like this poem very much thanks for sharing.

[Travis Prino]

thank you!

[RannunculusBlooms]

that 5th stanza is one of my favorite things ive read in a long time!

[Travis Prino]

thank you!