Short Poem

by "short poem" i mean really short poem :P i know it is only 4 lines but uh i sorta rushed :(

Wear a mask that grins and lies,

it hides our cheeks and shades our eyes.

The debt we pay to human guile,

with torn and broken hearts, we smile.

Reviews

[Grace Catherine C.]

I really like it, lenght doesn't matter in a poem, simply the message and this is lovely.

[Silent Knight]

Interesting. Good flow and rhyme scheme.

[dreaming dame]

;) Wow, love it. Wonderfull use of words :)

[Tree Bark]

Thank you for the reading it differently than others! :)

[Brianna Brie]

Perhaps at one time, we have all experienced this feeling. This may be short, but it is full of insight.