True Love

True Love

A Poem by Tree Bark
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this is not as good because it's just about the weapons i had and how much i liked them :D

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The first
Was the very worst
My very first knife
How it caused so much strife
The second
How it beckoned
My very first sword
Small but adored
The third
How it flew like a bird
My very first katana
What rhymes with katana :P
The fourth
Imported from the north
My very first gun
How it brought so much fun
The fifth
Not a myth
My very first sickle
It was so fickle
The sixth
I was always found with
My very first rifle
Not used often but brought so much stifle
At last, my one True Love
So tall i had to look above
My very first Scythe
I am eternally filled with such blithe

© 2011 Tree Bark


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Kewl

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like it. it's like the jaded, adult version of dr seuss :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I Like :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the "What rhymes with katana :P" line. Made me laugh. You named some cool weapons. Katana would have to be my favourite because it's like a ninja sword. Good job =]


Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh yes very enjoyable but sad

Posted 12 Years Ago



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