Bloody Tears

Rain, rain, go away.
Because of you the pain will stay.
Slit my throat, cut out my heart.
Leave me here, torn apart.
Crimson tears stream down my face,
My heart beats at a steady pace.
As I slowly try to stand again;
Alone and standing in the rain.
"I don't need you anymore....."
Is all I think as tears steadily pour.
I hate you like I hate my life;
But love is what cuts like a knife.
Love is death and death is you;
It's pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again,
And blind me in a rope of pain.
Poison blood steams down my head,
Like a a long, silk ribbon, tied by a thread,
To a platinum bullet in my skull.....
..... Now a memory that's faded and dull.

Reviews

[Dove]

O.M.G. This poem is spectacular. Its kind of dark but I love dark poetry. The rhyming was right on point and the flow of the words was as close to perfection as a poem can come. I have written something similar to this beore but yours is definitely a tad better than mine. Very good job.

[Moonwind Belmont]

Bloody tears incidentally is coincidentally the title of the soundtrack/bgm of one of the best video games ever made, CASTLEVANIA...the lines of your poem reflect the darkness and the sadness of the storyline of the game...very nice coincidence being a castlevania fan myself for so many years m/

[ATG]

Great poem. Flowed really well with the exception of a few places. Over all, it was great and got the point across perfectly.

[paradise]

Awwhe Tree Best poem you have ever wriittten!!!

[Silent Knight]

Very nice.

[May]

!!! Best poem i have EVER read! A-MAZE-ING!