Serendipitous Kiss

The moment when common sense flies out of the window and your mastery of emotion escapes you.

Seared on her soul
And there it burned
Amore's spear, smoldering
Stench of love lingering
Heavily drifting
Encapsulating, lifting
Heady aromas arousing
Spinning into passionate bliss
From just one serendipitous kiss

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Friend Helen From Across The Pond,
This poem I liken to throwing gas on a fire! I have been of the opinion for years that the serendipitous kiss is the key that unlocks the door to a couples pneuma’s and fuses them as one. If I understand the word serendipitous, it means unexpected. Something that just blindsides us and overloads all reason. An unexpected kiss launched my hand to paper for poems like “Fused, Panties, Night Thoughts, and Gravitational Force”.
There is nothing on earth that can move a soul like a soft kiss while looking into the others eyes, especially if you are approaching the point of sending each other over the edge of no return.
A beautiful sensuous poem that is understood best by those whom have discovered that fire and gas can go very well together.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[TrimarcoRansome]

Chemistry, raw, animal magnetism of which we have no control. The very one which leaves you reeling as if you've been hit by a freight train you didn't see coming!
Helen

[Sue]

Amazing what one kiss can do for a gal :) Short but so sweet :)

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you! I wanted to capture the purity of that moment when the chemistry hits you and something changes.

[Tate Morgan]

AH the kiss of life when it touches you you are in the midst of loving life

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you Tate ;-) glad you enjoyed it

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Wow short but breathtaking.This beautiful and magical,every line was seared into my mind with dazzling enjoyment.Great work.

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you!

[Rita L. Sev]

One kiss, and the world is changed... Lovely and sensual write!

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you!

[quinfinn]

this is like an elixir, intoxicating and relevant. your words are pure magic and this encapsulates the feeling you describe beautifully! this, my friend, is going to my faves library!

[TrimarcoRansome]

Awww thank you!...I didn't know there was one!

[quinfinn]

oh yes, we all have one! up there where read requests and all other options are.....

[TrimarcoRansome]

aHa! found it!...thank you!

[quinfinn]

i have been here for years....will help you any way i can. all you need do is ask.

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you! its good to have some allies in a new place!

[quinfinn]

if you see me online, i am at your disposal for help and friendship.

[lothlorienwriter]

Powerful and passionate piece that fully arouses!

[TrimarcoRansome]

I am glad it had an affect, I wanted to keep it short, as these kisses are, they just linger in time!

[PublishingAgent]

This poem is just so sweet I totally adore it.

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a kiss says so much...that first one tells us if there chemistry---certainly something that seems a lost art now...kissing.
but of course being a good catholic boy years ago..that is basically what we had, so we made good use of it...had to be good.

really like this poem, it made me reminisce..

jacob

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you Jacob! it is lovey to hear it evokes memories!
Helen

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Bloody hell Helen you have stepped up several gears with this beauty.
Damn I thought i was at least better than you at one thing :)
Wrong again..............

[TrimarcoRansome]

I would not say that, some of your stunners blow me away, leave me staring at the screen before me....x

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Ive recently relearned all i know about serendipity.......its bloomin good stuff if you go with the flow and have the eyes to see it. My eyes had a lot of retraining in.......well you know where.

[TrimarcoRansome]

It is one of my favorite words, you have to be open to it though, you are right there...Life shrouds us in our cloaks of protection, we need to learn to let them go at some point or miss what is right in front of us!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

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