The snake

Someone i love called me a snake

that little hint made my heart ache

i'm wondering now am i real or fake?

To find out i need a break

so who i am for God's sake?

Once i read in a fortune cake

truth lays on the ground of Otters Lake

you have to find the bottle and shake

one spoonful is all you take

only be careful the glass can break!

Sounds not too hard to make

but then i saw it was the snake

whispering to me with tongues of fake

omg my body starts to shake

Bring me away from that damn old lake!

Covered with sweat finally i wake

my names's not "Trixie" or "Welldone Steak"

look at me i am no snake

only your loving Girl to take.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A snake? I like the thoughts and the flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending.
"look at me i am no snake
only your loving Girl to take."
I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Triny Silverglass]

thank you for your nice comment

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Arunima]

excellent rhyming...:):)loved it!!!

[Triny Silverglass]

thank you my friend

[Arunima]

Anytime:):)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Throughout your lines, I was lost into the rhymes. I must say this is the most rhythmic poem I have ever read with a beautiful meaning in it.

[Triny Silverglass]

your comment is such a nice little Poem, thank you

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I wish you always write such beautiful poems. Delighted to read your work.

[Nerf]

Snakes, a girl, lakes, I'm game!

This is a very introspective piece as the girl tries to figure herself through this dream. Only to wake and realise she's not anything else but who she is, someone with a lot of love to give.

Great write.

[Triny Silverglass]

thank you Nerf, your words always make me smile