Need You

Need You

A Poem by Tristianity

Here it comes... 
My heart begins to race.
There you are, there's your face.
I was breathless.
How did you make me feel this way?

 

I'm stuttering not knowing what to say or do.

You looked me in the eyes and I grabbed you.

You pulled me in closer and kissed my lips.

I never knew love felt like this.

 

He touched my face, his hands so soft.

My heart was pounding so hard.

Finally, I thought.

I'm actually in your arms...

 

Someone was coming, he tightened his embrace.

He had a look of concern on his face.

Why was I so scared?

I looked away..

 

I got up fast, I was reaching out for you.

I started to cry, I was so confused.

I started to realize I wasn't with you..

© 2011 Tristianity


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Tristianity,

Please excuse me while I clear my throat *pause, clear* sniff sniff* sadness - do you have a tissue?

If this be a dream, I understand - Dreams are difficult to decipher. If this be a reality than place be back to the dream.

I felt your confusion and mixed emotions, I felt your love and your fear. You did a great job, because I actually saw you turn your look.

This, tragedy, poetry is made of.

Have a great day,

Legacy

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

:/ I can actually feel your emotion in this one..

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Tristianity
Tristianity

Norwich, CT



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