What I saw Today

(Today)

Today I saw a fish

Yesterday I saw death

Tommorow I'm going to see me

 

 (Yesterday)

Today I saw death

Yesterday I saw you

Tommrow I'll see a fish

 

 (Tommrow)

Today I saw me

Yesterday I saw a fish

Tommrow I'll see life

 

 (Today)

Today I saw life

Yesterday I saw me

Tommrow I'll scrape a knee

 

 (Tommrow)

Today I scraped a knee

Yesterday I saw life

Tommorw I'll go scene

 

 (Yesterday)

Today I went scene

Yesterday I scraped a knee

Tommrow I'll tell you that you just wasted time reading a stupid poem I hate >:D

 

Author's Note

Tell me who read it all. Be honest. OH! Did you laugh or get a little angry that you wasted your time?

Reviews

[Archia]

I gotta laugh at that last line, I really gotta. It was really confusing, I was thinking there some some paradoxial thing to it or something, but I actually get it know. Oh I can't get over that last line, I loved it. I think it was a great idea. And hey, it didn't waste my time at all, it gave me a laugh.

[T. Michele Smock]

I GOT A LAUGH OUT OF YOUR PEOM....

[Jack Isaac]

I was very angry... in a good way :) I read it all.. each and every excessive use of Today, Yesterday, and Tomorrow. And to be honest... I read it all.. each and every excessive use of Today, Yesterday, and Tomorrow. Did I laugh? I read it all.. each and every excessive use of Today, Yesterday, and Tomorrow. ha ha ha ha ha ha... yes I laughed. Then I got angry because... I read it all.. each and every excessive use of Today, Yesterday, and Tomorrow. Did I waste my time? Well, I got a hell of a lot of points for this review !!!!! ha ha ha ha ha... So yes, to answer your question.... yes I did laugh. Aside from that... Nice poem! Thanks.

[dontwakeme]

Haha. I needed that.