Premonition

Throughout the tests of time we'll compose an intuition,

Giving each other 100/100 rather than 50/50,

Two artists working the same canvass in coalition,

Together we'll create a unique vision.

U N I together in one verse,

Both the good and the bad will create the chaos of our universe,

And it won't work unless I put U first,

I mean I can't spell universe unless I put U first.

This is not coming form my heart, this is my consciousness,

My heart is in your house of love dining fine in the lover's den,

Insecurity is a choice and I choose to trust you not other men,

Or friends. Third will come family, us second, first God our master.

In that order we'll build our kingdom and castle.

Pelicans in the courtyard. Well harvested gardens. A sincere sight to witness,

Loyal to my queen never to defile her with a mistress,

Before her hands go cold I'll work for Santa Claus mitless.

This is not a vision.

Instead a precisely planned premonition.

Reviews

[Bradley]

This is great. You have a unique voice which reads conversationally, yet has poetic flow. I really like the message here, too. "100/100 rather than 50/50" It's funny how you think you're whole until you meet someone that makes you more whole. I like how you described that particular phenomenon.