Godliness (haiku)

The world in ruins

Innocents fodder of war

Where is your god now?

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

In war and battle, God seeminly hides his head in disgust and..waits. Oh, he's called upon many times; "Oh, dear God..." "Oh God Ple-e-e-e-ase!" He's damned quite often. And yet, wars rage on and man plays the starring role...
Nice haiku. Evokes strong emotional response, just as they are intended to do...

[EileenMarie]

Great Haiku!

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Wow, this is very powerful. I myself have been dabbling with haikus/Senryus(form of Japanese poetry) lately. Check them out if you would like:)

-Cord

[Madelyn Defray]

I have never written a haiku, but the amazing truth behind yours makes me want to try, Thank you for your inspiring words and intelligent message!

[Kent Smotherman]

Thanks, Madelyn - and you should try one! They're a lot of fun since they are so concise. It's like popcorn - you can have as much as you want, they're so small! :)

[Cari Kinz]

I love haiku for the simple fact that you can say so much with so little... and you have done so here, very well. Beautifully and clearly stated.

[Audrey Howitt]

Beautifully said!

[Eloha]

It is true that much of war has been about religion, I have always found this ironic in the supreme.

Nice topic.

[pumpkin head]

deep intriguing haiku, nicely done